Author: Marsha

Hi Elizabeth,

One of the best ways to make sure a story doesn’t peter out is to show your story in action rather than to tell what your story is about. For example, in my novel Hope’s War

http://www.calla.com/hope.html

I begin with a very simple scene, about a grade 10 student on her first day in a school for the arts. I could have written something like this:

In grade nine, Kat almost got expelled from St. Paul’s high school, but then the principal had her tested and it turned out she was gifted. When she went to her new school the first day, she was nervous. Her friends from St. Paul’s seemed mad at her and the kids at the new school didn’t know her. There was only one student who would even talk to her.

The above gets the message across, but it’s telling about the story rather than showing the story.

tall_princess asked:

I have only really tried to write one novel, and I got about 90 pages of it done, and then I didn’t have anything else to say. I alternated points of view, and had it written as though there were several people thinking out loud, with one main one.

I like to write stories based on things I have been through, so I know a little bit about it. I personally don’t like to read something that someone has written, and been through it myself, knowing what it’s all about, and knowing that the information is wrong. I know that you can do research, but no matter how much research you do, I can’t seem to get the personalized veiwpoint. How can I get past that?

Here’s another super question from tall_princess:

“How do you come up with your ideas for writing a novel? I have no problem coming up with an idea for a novel, it’s just the craft of drawing it out into an interesting piece that I have an issue with. They always seem to end up as a short story writing piece. I finish what I have to say in 90 pages or less! How can I fix that?”

Hi Elizabeth,
For me, writing a novel is similar to reading one. I want to know what happens next. Also, I tend not to write novels on topics that I can find novels on. Ie, I’ll just pick up the novel and read it, but if I can’t find a novel on the topic, I write it.

Writing 90 pages is very impressive! That’s more of a novella than a short story.

Are you writing your stories in first person? If you are, that might be why they peter out after about 90 pages. If you can alternate points of view, it gives you more story to work with. In Nobody’s Child, I alternated between a male and female POV with two main narrators but a couple of minor ones too. I find that writing in third person past active gives the most flexibility in terms of being able to set vivid scenes but also being able to jump inside a variety of heads.

What sorts of stories do you like to write?

While noodling around livejournal blogs, I happened upon:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/tall_princess/

who had written a journal entry about how much she enjoyed my first novel, The Hunger. We have been chatting back and forth and here is a question she asked, and my response:

“I was wondering about a career as a novelist. What would you say about it, highlights, disadvantages, etc. Is there any advice you would give to a possible future novelist?”

Hi Elizabeth,
The best advice I could give is to do what you’re already doing, which is reading voraciously. One should read at least 1000 novels before trying to write one. And it’s a great idea to analyze them too. What works, what doesn’t work? What techniques does the author use to hold a reader’s interest? The other thing to do is to write regularly, so having a blog like this is a superb idea.

In terms of writing as a career, it is a very difficult profession to succeed in. They say it takes 10 years as an author to be an “overnight” success. My first book came out in 1996, so I’m waiting!

When you first start, you have to have a really thick skin. I got 100 rejections on my first novel manuscript. I did end up selling a movie option to a small Hollywood production company on it though (it never got made into a movie) and that option was a stepping stone for me. I got my first agent because of the option and shortly after that I got more acceptances. So developing a thick skin and a dogged persistence are two more suggestions I’d give.

Highlights? For me, having a person who dislikes reading tell me that one of my books made a reader out of them. Another highlight is when someone tells me that they learned something about a bit of history while reading my books for pleasure.

An article that I wrote is in the newest edition of Teaching Librarian magazine:

http://www.accessola.com/osla/site/showPage.cgi?page=about/magazine.htm

I had completely forgotten that I wrote it! I think I wrote it last spring. They’ve layed it out beautifully, with a photo of me and also the covers of many of my books and also some children’s art of my stories.

This article is called Hate Mail and is about my awful experiences when my picture book Enough came out in 2000 and I received hate mail and death threats. Enough is set during the famine in 1930s Ukraine which was instigated by Stalin and his henchmen to liquidate Ukrainians. It succeeded to the tune of 10 million people. My picture book (illustrated by Michael Martchenko) is about one girl and her father and how they trick the dictator and save one village from famine. Here’s my webpage on the book:

http://www.calla.com/enough.html

I was gobsmacked once the book was out to realize that there are people still alive who think that Stalin was a hero and they were offended by my book, which portrayed him as a bit of a buffoon. There were also people who thought that if Stalin killed 10 million Ukrainians, then they must have “done something to deserve it.” Sigh.

Thank goodness that as each year goes by, more Stalin myths fall to the wayside and people realize he was as evil — or more evil — than Hitler. What we forget, we’re bound to repeat.

I got a phone call from one of the reporters with the local newspaper. She said that they’re doing a Christmas (fluff piece) article on Christmas memories of “prominent” local people and wondered if she could interview me for it. Of course I agreed. Hmmm, seeing as the local Coles Book Store doesn’t even stock my books, I didn’t know I was that prominent. I wonder who the other prominent people are?

I had been waiting and waiting for a particular package to be delivered from an ebay vendor. In this package were several Christmas gifts plus a birthday gift for my dear friend and walking partner, Carol M.

Last Tuesday at around noon, just hours before my husband and I were heading to Mont Tremblant for a few days, the motion detector at our front step went off. I looked out onto the front step. No one was there, but there was a Canada Post delivery van in the driveway. I opened my front door, thinking I’d meet the delivery person as she walked up but then noticed that she had stuck a card on my mailbox that said “Sorry I missed you….”

She hadn’t rung the doorbell or knocked on the door!

I was in my stockinged feet and it had been raining but I didn’t want her to drive off with my package so I ran out the front door as she was backing out. I tapped on the window and she was quite startled. She rolled down the window and said, “Oh, I thought there was no one home.”

I said, “How would you know if you didn’t knock on the door or ring the bell?”

She didn’t have an answer for that, but she kept on backing out of my drive!!

I ran beside the truck, socks sopping in the puddles and hollered, “Could you please give me my package?”

She said, “No! You’re a crazy lady, running after my van like that!”

I said, “Stop! I want my package!!”

She kept pulling out (we have a LONG drive) and I kept beside her and then got in front and blocked her once she was on the road.

She yelled out, “There’s customs due on it, just pick it up from the post office.”

I said, “I’ll PAY the customs, just PLEASE give me my package!”

Finally she relented. I think she could see that she’d waste more time trying to skedaddle than to just give it to me. She pulled back up and I got the money for her and then I asked for her name.

She said, “Ann. But there’s no point in complaining about me. They won’t do anything.”

She went on to say, “Besides, it’s raining. I don’t have to deliver a package if it’s raining.”

I stepped outside and held up my hands. “Guess what?” I said. “It’s not raining.”

Who ever heard of not delivering a package in the rain anyway?

Soooo….

Today I called the Canada Post Ombudsman to complain. That office told me to first lodge a complaint with Canada Post customer service. If you would like to complain about service, here’s the number:

1 800 267-1177

It’s hard to get through (lots of complaints?) so you need to keep hitting redial. When you get through, you can fast-track through by hitting:

1225

and then

20

They tell me I’ll hear back in two weeks, and if I don’t, to call back. My reference number is 613144407. Argh.